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Who Wants to Live Forever? by ~deppgirl:icondeppgirl:



Who wants to live forever
Who wants to be left alone
Who wants to be left cold
Who wants to be left lonely
All around you things will die
All around you things will wilt
Love will pass through
Your immortal fingers
Who wants to wait forever
For love
Only you will go on
Only you must continue to live
Because you will live forever
The love wilts
Like a flower long forgotten
Dead, like your still beating heart
Until the death of the world
Until this universe stops living
You must go on
Why dare to love?
Why dare to care?
You will live forever
And they will not
They will die
And you will be waiting
Forever
©2007-2009 ~deppgirl
:icondeppgirl:

Author's Comments

I'm not sure if I really liked how this turned out...still it's based on one: The song Who wants to live forever by Breaking Benjamin and two: my vampire character who is constantly being hurt by his immortality, Tucker Dracula. Again I'm not all to sure if I like how this turned out so all the more reason for comments!!

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:iconspokenaubade:
Full of poignant, powerful questions. You don't even have to be a vampire to wonder.

Reads as if it were full of powerful emotion when written.
:iconrussetwolf13:
The answere to the question, is that everyone wants to live forever.

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Glorious leader of ~THE-AXE-GANG

Proud outcast from the ~Anthro-Alliance

On Twilight: One can only assume that 109 year old Edward is totally screwing with Bella's head. Why else would he date a vapid, boring, stupid girl like her?
:icondeppgirl:
yeah but i seriously doubt that I would want to

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Loving someone that doesn't love you is like reaching for a star - You know you'll never reach it but you just got to keep trying
:icondeppgirl:
thanks alot ^^

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Loving someone that doesn't love you is like reaching for a star - You know you'll never reach it but you just got to keep trying
:iconrussetwolf13:
Think about it. If you could live forever than all these passing woes would do what they do best, pass. You could out wait everyone and everything.

And the future, think about the cool crap they could make if you lived long enough to see it.

God knows I'm still waiting on that werewolf pill, or serum, or shot, or whatever the hell they come up with.

--
Glorious leader of ~THE-AXE-GANG

Proud outcast from the ~Anthro-Alliance

On Twilight: One can only assume that 109 year old Edward is totally screwing with Bella's head. Why else would he date a vapid, boring, stupid girl like her?
:iconcheesepie90:
if you had the one you loved immortal and yourself immotral then it wont be so bad and become hermits :hug:

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Peter loves wormy
remember Floaty Man 1971-2007
blarg
:iconcrimsonapathy:
first off
i love that breaking benjamin song, i'm acctutally listenning to it right now
creepy, right?
second
love your writing
(per usual)
<3
Cole

--
"What if i wanted to break? Laugh it all off in your face? What would you do?"

"If I held my ground would you ask me to change?"

"Fuck you firefly, have you lost your light? Now i hate your ways, 'cause they're just like mine"
:icondeppgirl:
^^ thanks

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Loving someone that doesn't love you is like reaching for a star - You know you'll never reach it but you just got to keep trying
:icondeppgirl:
yeah :nod:

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Loving someone that doesn't love you is like reaching for a star - You know you'll never reach it but you just got to keep trying
:icondeppgirl:
:shrug: just my personal views

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Loving someone that doesn't love you is like reaching for a star - You know you'll never reach it but you just got to keep trying

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