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Who Wants to Live Forever? by ~deppgirl:icondeppgirl:

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Who wants to live forever
Who wants to be left alone
Who wants to be left cold
Who wants to be left lonely
All around you things will die
All around you things will wilt
Love will pass through
Your immortal fingers
Who wants to wait forever
For love
Only you will go on
Only you must continue to live
Because you will live forever
The love wilts
Like a flower long forgotten
Dead, like your still beating heart
Until the death of the world
Until this universe stops living
You must go on
Why dare to love?
Why dare to care?
You will live forever
And they will not
They will die
And you will be waiting
Forever
©2007-2008 ~deppgirl
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I'm not sure if I really liked how this turned out...still it's based on one: The song Who wants to live forever by Breaking Benjamin and two: my vampire character who is constantly being hurt by his immortality, Tucker Dracula. Again I'm not all to sure if I like how this turned out so all the more reason for comments!!
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*SpokenAubade:iconSpokenAubade: Aug 14, 2007, 2:48:04 PM
Full of poignant, powerful questions. You don't even have to be a vampire to wonder.

Reads as if it were full of powerful emotion when written.
~russetwolf13:iconrussetwolf13: Aug 14, 2007, 2:49:40 PM
The answere to the question, is that everyone wants to live forever.

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"I elect ~russetwolf13 for best long guy hair!" ~Tangerine-Tickle

Fist of the North Star: Ken powers up only one level, but how many times does Goku touch a guy and make his own body kill him?
~deppgirl:icondeppgirl: Aug 14, 2007, 3:44:44 PM
yeah but i seriously doubt that I would want to

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THE HAPPY SONG!!!! :evillaugh:
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~deppgirl:icondeppgirl: Aug 14, 2007, 3:44:57 PM
thanks alot ^^

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THE HAPPY SONG!!!! :evillaugh:
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~russetwolf13:iconrussetwolf13: Aug 14, 2007, 6:36:58 PM
Think about it. If you could live forever than all these passing woes would do what they do best, pass. You could out wait everyone and everything.

And the future, think about the cool crap they could make if you lived long enough to see it.

God knows I'm still waiting on that werewolf pill, or serum, or shot, or whatever the hell they come up with.

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"I elect ~russetwolf13 for best long guy hair!" ~Tangerine-Tickle

Fist of the North Star: Ken powers up only one level, but how many times does Goku touch a guy and make his own body kill him?
~cheesepie90:iconcheesepie90: Aug 14, 2007, 7:39:03 PM
if you had the one you loved immortal and yourself immotral then it wont be so bad and become hermits :hug:

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remember Floaty Man 1971-2007
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~CrimsonApathy:iconCrimsonApathy: Aug 15, 2007, 6:17:24 AM
first off
i love that breaking benjamin song, i'm acctutally listenning to it right now
creepy, right?
second
love your writing
(per usual)
<3
Cole

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"What if i wanted to break? Laugh it all off in your face? What would you do?"

"If I held my ground would you ask me to change?"

"Fuck you firefly, have you lost your light? Now i hate your ways, 'cause they're just like mine"
~deppgirl:icondeppgirl: Aug 15, 2007, 6:34:29 AM
^^ thanks

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THE HAPPY SONG!!!! :evillaugh:
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~deppgirl:icondeppgirl: Aug 15, 2007, 6:35:06 AM
yeah :nod:

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THE HAPPY SONG!!!! :evillaugh:
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~deppgirl:icondeppgirl: Aug 15, 2007, 6:35:53 AM
:shrug: just my personal views

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THE HAPPY SONG!!!! :evillaugh:
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